Suggested changes: {before : after}

On Sat, 15 Jun 2002 23:16:39 -0400 Sam Vilsmeier <syp104@email.psu.edu>
wrote:

"Goddamn it! Why?!" He screamed as he punched the {Mailbox : mailbox} nex=

t to him. The

force of his blow struck the large reinforced steel container with the fo=

rce

of a cannonball. The blow crushed its front end, ripped it off its mounti=

ng

bolts, and sent it through the air to cave in the front of a parked Toyot=

a.

He then thought for a moment. This was not the proper place for this
conversation, and he was getting more than his fair share of attention fr=

om

passers by. He shook his head, and sighed. Sending a {Mailbox : mailbox} =

soaring into

someone's front end would attract attention, after all..

Before she could even yelp, Ranma lifted her up off her feet and bounded =

up

onto a nearby rooftop. As he ran and hopped from rooftop to rooftop, he
could not help but notice Hotaru relaxed in his arms. Almost like she
trusted him. She was a fool to do so. He'd hurt everyone he'd ever met, a=

nd

it {looks : looked} like she {is : was} the newest victim on the list.

"Hotaru, I'm sorry that you {get : got} dragged into this."

"Explain the fianc=E9es." Hotaru gave him a dirty look. She {did : didn't=

} know what was

up, but if he was just some form of Casanova he was getting her glaive
somewhere dark and tender.

Now she knew the {identity : identities : names} of the 'competition', bu=

t how did he get engaged

to them in the first place? He had heard him mention his father, but litt=

le

more. "Explain."

Ranma gave his side an experimental poke and blinked. He smiled brightly =

and

looked at Hotaru. "That was cool! {Howd : How'd} ya do it? Is it some kin=

da technique?

Can ya teach me?"

I wonder how he'll like her glowing eyes.

Ranma laughed. "Of course it's not weird! Do you know how much I wished I
could do that? Training would be a lot easier of you could make all your
aches, pains, scrapes and bruises vanish when you were {done? : done.}"

Caught! Ranma blushed and rapidly looked away, waiting {to :} and wonderi=

ng what

implement of pain Hotaru'd deservedly use on him for acting like such a
pervert. Interestingly, he didn't remember what she'd used on him when th=

ey

first met. "It's nothin', Hotaru..."

I'm sure the Glaive of Silence would sting some.  For a very short time.

I swore to everyone that I would post chapter 2 by the end of the week.
Because of the rewrite I could not finish it, so I divided it into two
parts. PsyckoSama is a mad-man of his word ^_^

You can drop this paragraph now.  You've posted this chapter a couple times
now.

--=20
Mac :})
Give a hobbit a fish and he eats fish for a day.
Give a hobbit a ring and he eats fish for an age.



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