----- Original Message -----
From: "Michael A Chase" <mchase@ix.netcom.com>
To: "noirchloe" <noirchloe@nyc.rr.com>; "FFML mailing list"
<ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Friday, June 14, 2002 7:50 PM
Subject: [C&C][FFML] [Ranma/Multi][lime] Enemies of the Crystal State,
chapter 4

Suggested changes: {before : after}

On Thu, 13 Jun 2002 21:39:18 -0400 noirchloe <noirchloe@nyc.rr.com> wrote:

Http://kpjam.anifics.com   Is where you can find this and other stories.

Thanks for including the URL.

I sometimes forget...
As usual, I won't bore you and everyone with my simple agreements on my
still poor grammer skills.

Sighing deeply she regarded the man evenly.  Remembering his flashy

escape

from earlier, she tried to formulate a plan of actions.  She had no
{misconceptions : idea} about his abilities, but having no doubt about

hers, she was

confident in the outcome.  Taking a few even breaths and getting into a
defensive crouch, she decided to give diplomacy one last try before they

got

into the fighting.

KP:  I actually meant misconceptions.  I wanted her to be slightly
overconfident, or maybe even grossly so.

"She chased after Vash and the guy that took him.  We went back to get

our

stuff and the {Donkey : donkey}.  But we lost contact with her," she

said the last

softly, morosely.

KP:  I don't know why I have an uncontrollable urge to capitalize donkey...
I caught or had pointed out to me a lot more occurances of it >_<

So hopefully more pieces will come together in the next chapter.

KP:  can I plead the fifth.  Am actually trying very hard to have the
backstory come out naturally; so, I won't promise to actually reveal much
more of how things came to stand as they are very soon.  There is quite a
lot of backstory if you think about it.

And thanks so much again for your comments, and for reading.

KP

--
Mac :})
Give a hobbit a fish and he eats fish for a day.
Give a hobbit a ring and he eats fish for an age.

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