Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Wed, 22 May 2002 21:32:01 -0400 Sam Vilsmeier <syp104@email.psu.edu>
wrote:
Haruka gave Hotaru a harsh glare, "Oh, shit? Is that all you have to say for
yourself, young lady?"
Why do people say "young lady" when discussing unladylike behavior?
Hotaru sighed. {I : In} a dreamy voice she said, "It was great. He does this
wonderful thing with his tongue..." Hotaru eyes jetted open, and her hand
went to her mouth. Did she really say that out loud? Blushing, she looked
down, trying to hide her embarrassment.
Haruka screamed in exasperation. "Not that! I don't want the fucking
details! How did it come about?!"
Well, she did answer the question...
Ranma gulped as he pressed the doorbell of his childhood home. Now he had to
talk with his mother. While Ryouga gave him some ideas, and an 'incentive'
to do the right thing, it would be {he : his} mother who had the greatest say about
his fate. She would know what would preserve honor.
"Yeah {mom : Mom}..." replied Ranma.
Ranma stood up and turned to his mother. "Can we talk outside {mom : Mom}?"
On Usagi's face was a gentle, friendly smile. Pulling the younger girl into
a hug, she said, "Hotaru, this is a time for joy, not sadness. You're going
to {me : be} a mother. Congratulations, Hotaru-chan!"
"Congratulations, here is to the most idiotic action preformed in my recent
memory! Cheers!" said Setsuna raised as the glass to the two Outers, and
chugged the entire {content : contents}.