Subject: [FFML] [C&C]Fourth Tendo 5
From: Michael A Chase
Date: 6/12/2002, 8:17 PM
To: Thryth <thrythlind@yahoo.com>, FFML mailing list <ffml@anifics.com>


Suggested changes: {before : after}

On Tue, 11 Jun 2002 10:43:39 -0700 (PDT) Thryth <thrythlind@yahoo.com>
wrote:

   "Yeah, right Kuno," Nabiki said.  "So now {your : you're}
three-timing my sister then?"

   Nabiki watched the short exchange between Kuno and
Ranma with a smirk.  Then stepped out with a kettle of
water while Ranma-chan was being hugged by the idiot
swordsman.  She poured {of : it on} a suddenly screaming Ranma.

   "{Now : Nah : No}," Ranma said, hands behind his head.  "It's
nothing."

   Nabiki counted {the photos up : the photos : up the photos} that she had recovered
and decided that she could make another two thousand
by selling them back to Kuno before beginning {on :} mass
distribution.
   Unfortunately, the best photo of Tarre was missing.
 She still had the negative, but it would mean that
she'd have to wait a while before selling it to Kuno
again.  Obviously he had managed to {keep : hold} on to that
one, since she knew which ones Tarre, Ranma and Akane
had collectively disposed of.

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