Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Tue, 11 Jun 2002 10:43:39 -0700 (PDT) Thryth <thrythlind@yahoo.com>
wrote:
"Yeah, right Kuno," Nabiki said. "So now {your : you're}
three-timing my sister then?"
Nabiki watched the short exchange between Kuno and
Ranma with a smirk. Then stepped out with a kettle of
water while Ranma-chan was being hugged by the idiot
swordsman. She poured {of : it on} a suddenly screaming Ranma.
"{Now : Nah : No}," Ranma said, hands behind his head. "It's
nothing."
Nabiki counted {the photos up : the photos : up the photos} that she had recovered
and decided that she could make another two thousand
by selling them back to Kuno before beginning {on :} mass
distribution.
Unfortunately, the best photo of Tarre was missing.
She still had the negative, but it would mean that
she'd have to wait a while before selling it to Kuno
again. Obviously he had managed to {keep : hold} on to that
one, since she knew which ones Tarre, Ranma and Akane
had collectively disposed of.