Suggested changes: {before : after}
Don't be discouraged, but the [Final] version was severely line wrapped, so
I'm doing my C&C on the newest one before it. If there were significant
differences, please post yet again.
It looks like this copy was an RTF attachment that got converted to text.
I found a few joined words that seem to be a result of that conversion.
I'm not marking any of those unless they wouldn't get caught by a spell
checker.
On Wed, 12 Jun 2002 05:05:59 -0700 Christopher Olsen
<christopherolsen28@hotmail.com> wrote:
All the characters in this story are the creation of Akahori Satoru,
Kotobuki Tsukasa, and Rumiko Takahashi... or practically all of them,
anyway.The title is stolen from Heinlein... with one letter s added.
They are even more stranger anyway, so the plural is appropriate.
"{My : Your} poems?" Bloodberry said incredulously.
Chodo smiled again, shaking his head. "If someone told me yesterday that I'd
be meeting someone who {know : knew} my ancestor from five hundred years ago, I'd
have thought they were crazy."
Nabiki frowned "We {had :} did have intruder in the palace last night. She
managed to get all the way down to the lab."
Please C&C, it's why I write! You can find almost all the previous
Chaptersto this at:
http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Dojo/1449/ssl.html[1]
Thank you for including the URL. I have been following this story since
the beginning, but others might not be so lucky.