--- AJ Andreason <andreasona@msn.com> wrote:

    Well, this story, for all it's shortness, managed to pull me in quite
well. I think it was just a tad sophisticated of language for Cologne POV
(not because she isn't sophisticated, but because her personality is just a
little more down to earth) but that's really a stylistic preference.
    Of course, when you get down to it, almost anything can be stylistic
preference. I once saw a fic where the author went out of his way to always
misspell a certain word. Go fig.
    Anyway, was this an into? A teaser? Is there more coming, or did you
just post this out of some malignant desire to yank the chain of the FFML
subscribers in general?
    That would be really mean.
    Post more. I like.

This was actually a just a bit of a character sketch more than a story (no
clear idea of anything further, other than the scene taking the whole debate of
coming clean out of her hands)

BTW, if the Ancient in question notices movement upstairs, and Cologne is
calling down to Shampoo, than are you _sure_ the Ancient in question is the
former? ^_^

    AJ Andreason

PS  Do you have a web site knocking around anywhere? There was a fic written
by you that I started to read and liked, but I can't find it anymore...

Nope.  Worse luck, I just lost my knapsack... with _all_ my discs (my resume I
keep in hardcopy as backup, but my 'fics... itai!)

HTG 

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