Well, this story, for all it's shortness, managed to pull me in quite
well. I think it was just a tad sophisticated of language for Cologne POV
(not because she isn't sophisticated, but because her personality is just a
little more down to earth) but that's really a stylistic preference.
    Of course, when you get down to it, almost anything can be stylistic
preference. I once saw a fic where the author went out of his way to always
misspell a certain word. Go fig.
    Anyway, was this an into? A teaser? Is there more coming, or did you
just post this out of some malignant desire to yank the chain of the FFML
subscribers in general?
    That would be really mean.
    Post more. I like.

    AJ Andreason

PS  Do you have a web site knocking around anywhere? There was a fic written
by you that I started to read and liked, but I can't find it anymore...


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