Roja Cyd wrote:
>
> A fic.
And it wasn't half bad.
But I'm afraid I have a lot of trouble reading it, since I'm spoiled by
the 'line between every paragraph' format that many authors choose to
post in. It's not to say that you have to change, merely that it would
make it easier for _me_. And for that, you hardly need to go by every
word I say.
About the fic itself, it was fun. It was lighthearted, and read much
closer to the real Ranma manga than anything _I've_ ever written. ;)
I'm curious to where you're going to take it, and looking forward to more. :p
I wish I had more to offer, but the format made it difficult for me to
offer a line-by-line C&C.
> *********************************************************** Notes: I
> really don't know if Japanese teens read English comics, but I
> figured, why not? There must be SOME who do. If not, please assume
> for the purposes of this story. :) Thanks. C&C and comments
> appreciated.