From: Miller, Bert

A nice enough read, though I'm not sure that you're going anywhere terribly

interesting (translation: suggest more of a hook in chapter 1).

I concur. If you do not wish to add any more to the story in this chapter, I
suggest shortening it.

Certainly not clear what the title means (yet).

Yeah. She hasn't made a wish, nor does it look like she needs to for the
purposes of the story.

As far as I know, that's not canonical (as far as I know, the question

never even comes up in the manga)

Nor has her surname come up in the OAV or Movie. Still, if you feel you must
use one. Go ahead.

      "Me?  I'm the captain of the softball team.  "I'm also
sort of an unofficial member of the motor club."

Why "unofficial"?  Not sure there is any such period in AMG
manga continuity, where she's certainly a member.

As far as I can remember, Megumi has never been involved in Motor Club
activities in the manga.

Clearly you're doing something different here, which is good.

I should hope so. You have so many characters noticing things that they've
never noticed before, it would be a real disappointment if the matter is
simply dropped by the next chapter.

I would like to read more of your story, I hope to see improvements in
future chapters.


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