Read your fic when you posted it on fanfic.net. Liked it, although not the
best I've read, it was still better than most of the stuff available on
fanfic.net.

You're not exactly on new ground here. There's even a short arc in the manga
where Belldandy lost her powers briefly. The difference was that she wasn't
mortal at the time. Hmm...
Keiichi said much in that chapter that would be applicable here.
The biggest problem I can see is that Belldandy has absolute trust in
Keiichi. I would take a lot to break that trust, let alone make her flee the
temple. A lot more than what you have written. And to who would she turn to?
I might be able to help on the fourth chapter if you can send a copy of it.


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