On Thu, 23 May 2002 22:58:11 -0500 Thermopyle <Thermopyle@tds.net> wrote:
From: "Michael A Chase" <mchase@ix.netcom.com>
To: "Thermopyle" <Thermopyle@tds.net>; "FFML" <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Thursday, May 23, 2002 9:46 PM
Subject: [FFML] [C&C][Xover][Ranma][Ah! My Goddess!] Young At Heart
Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Thu, 23 May 2002 20:39:40 -0500 Thermopyle <Thermopyle@tds.net>
wrote:
She noticed Belldandy was standing on the table the other two were
sitting at, quietly watching them talk. Apparently she was content to
let them figure out how to solve this situation.
This confused me at first since I didn't notice anything earlier indicating
that Belldandy was shrunken. The first other indication I found was when
she was on the counter directing Keiichi in the kitchen.
True. Forgot to mention it at some point beforehand. Actually, there's not
any more warning for that than there is for the Skuld being grown bit. I'm
trying to decide whether I should put a very brief summary of the situation at
the beginning of the fic, or if I should try to mention a few details in the
story itself. I'm not seeing any obvious spots to put those details in,
though. >_<
Possibly later when the French farce ends and Ranma and the goddesses
compare notes on how each got into their current state to see if either set
can help the other. If the story continues, there would be plenty more
chances.
...it's 'by', not 'on'? I've always said 'It was on accident.' or 'He did it
on accident.', etc. 'by accident' sounds really weird to me. Maybe it's
regional? Or am I just messed up here?
Very likely regional. In my neek o'th woods, it might occur in archiac
speech, but would not be expected in writing.
This does look interesting. I suspect they will find Ranma in the
furo.
You think so? ^_^;
He was concerned about how dirty he'd gotten and I can't think of a more
embarassing place for him to be discovered. On further thought, he could
also be caught raiding the pantry since he's also getting very hungry.