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Anyway, I won't update this for a while since I'm concentrating on the
Ranma/Noir fic and trying to not let myself get sidetracked as usual,

but any

comments on the story would definitely be appreciated, whether they be
technical or creative.

Well, I'll give you this comment, and you can take it as you will:

I'd rather see more of this than your other fic.  Not that the R/N one's
bad, this one is just much more interesting to me.  Very well done - one
of your more polished pieces, IMO.

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Chris

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