On Sun, 19 May 2002, Thryth wrote:

   Cologne remembered what had happened when some
abusive boyfriend had caught Shampoo's attention by
smacking his girlfriend in front of the store. 
Cologne was about to do something herself to teach the
young man a lesson, but Shampoo beat her to it.

I wonder if Cologne or Shampoo would really think this.  Considering their
marriage custom of a woman marrying an (outside) man who defeats her, they're
just as likely to think that hitting one's girlfriend is perfectly appropriate
and that if the girl doesn't fight back that means she really likes him.

About the story in general, it was interesting at the start, but it seems
you're stretching things in order to get rid of the Ranma cast in a hurry.  I
can't see most of the cast endangering Midori or attacking Ranma when he
doesn't want to fight.  And while I'm not a great Akane fan, I can't see her
sleeping with Ryouga (and why doesn't she get an abortion?),


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