Therm wrote:

Both she and Mihoshi entered the office and gave a crisp salute.

"Captain

Drebbin. Officers Makabi and Kiramitsu reporting for special assignment.

Okay, unless I'm reading this wrong, a sequence of events:

Kiyone hesitently enters.
Mihoshi enters bravely.
Kiyone enters again, stiffly this time.
Kiyone and Mihoshi enter again, together, formally.

Why so many times?  o_O;

Revisions where we change some things and not others. :) I've got it down to
one entry for each of them now. Thanks for picking that up..

D.B. Sommer

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