Bah. Now I must finally comment on these as well:

 Quite a few, I thought.

Here's a couple, for starters:

    Nephrite watched his wounds attempt to seal themselves as the
spikes were withdrawn from his shoulder. They made progress, but
stopped after repairing only a small amount of the damage. He gazed
in surprise at the girl who had accomplished such a task. "You,"
he coughed, "did it..."

    "You're welcome," Molly breathed in a relieved, exhausted
voice, in a slightly sarcastic-yet-serious manner only achieved by
such great actors as Scott Bakula while she fell flat on her back.

Heh

    Al touched a few buttons on the hand-link device, moving
nearer to Doctor Beckett. His expression mirrored the surprise
Nephrite was going through. "Sam! This is amazing! You're not
gonna believe this!"

    "At this point," Sam replied in a soft, exhausted voice, "I'd
be willing to believe practically anything."

Ditto

    "This is what you came here to do!" Al announced, gesturing
toward the data coming through on his hand-link. "You weren't just
here to save the guy's life! You came to reunite him with his
familiy and remind him who his daughter is!"

Yep. Typical QL plot. :)

    "Nephrite's love for Molly is healing him!" Serena awed.

Hey, it's Sailor Moon. That's how things work here.

    In another moment, the hole punctured 

might just be 'puncture'

in Nephrite's shoulder

had completely disappeared.

Largely in part becaue the shoulder had disappeared as well.

    Pushing the spectacles up against the bridge of his nose with
one finger, he took in his surroundings. He stood in some sort of
control room overlooking what looked like a large submarine bay.
Only, the water was red and instead of a submarine, the head and
shoulders of a giant robot poked out of the liquid. The robot's
hand was raised out of the water with several broken cables
protrusing from its arm.

Oh dear. This should be good. 

    Skuld looked at her eldest sister. "No he wasn't! I've never
granted a wish to anyone who..." She paused as part of her mind found
the forgotten memory reel, dusted it off, gingerly hooked it up to
the projecter, and watched the old events unfold over a bag of
popcorn and a fizzy soda.

Heh. Cute. Urd's doing as Goddess of the Past?

    "But you said I could wish for anything!" A.S.K. complained

Skuld: Anything is a relative term.

power up and take this jerk out!"

    "I called him a pansy!" Belldandy cried. "I feel terrible!"

Heh. Typical Bell.

Nice work.

D.B. Sommer




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