--- Michael A Chase <mchase@ix.netcom.com> wrote:
With Tarre running the household, I wouldn't expect
Kasumi to have the
level of domestic skills she seems to have or the
moral authority that came
from running the home.
which is why Akane said "Didn't want to disappoint"
rather than "Couldn't disappoint."
Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Sun, 5 May 2002 12:52:49 -0700 (PDT) Thryth
<thrythlind@yahoo.com> wrote:
"Sayonara, Oneesama," Tarre said cheerfully.
"I
hope the dinner was okay." Kasumi was {shoulder :
shouldering} her
bags and getting ready to return to her apartment.
"You were fine, Tarre," Kasumi said. "Just
keep up
the hard work and you'll be as good as me
someday."
If Tarre has been the maid of all work since Kasumi
was 9, either she's
already as good as Kasumi or she doesn't have the
aptitude to be as good.
"I shall try," Kasumi answered vaguely. She
turned
to Akane and Nabiki. "Now I expect you two to
behave
at school with Ranma-kun."
This sounds like Kasumi was acting "Mother" even
though Tarre was doing
most of the work.
"She still has some of that personality...though with
Tarre doing the work Nabiki mostly ignores her and
Akane just trys to get around her
"No problem, Ranma-san," Tarre said cheerfully,
waving {: to} the old woman as they continued
along the walk.
"Uhh, how did you get me away from my Pop
then?"
Ranma asked. She pointed at the lamp post that
was
still rammed into the ground.
It must have stopped sparking by now...
"Go tell Akane to get downstairs," Nabiki
calmly
said to one of her lieutenants. "I we're going to
lose some {funds : bets : money}."
They were still deciding {over :} whether the
challenge
applied to her when she started to turn away from
the
school and softly edge away from them all, trying
not
to attract attention. Someone noticed {it : her}.
"TARRE TENDO I LOVE YOU!!!" they shouted,
charging
forward. With the signal given{: ,} the horde
moved.
Akane looked embarrassed for a moment. Tarre
opened her mouth to answer, which was when the
roll of
thunder above {invoked : queued : lead} Akane to
pull Ranma into the
school.
"I give you that information, it's going to
cost
Kuno-{Baby : baby}," Nabiki said simply.
What about "That information will cost you
Kuno-baby."?
"Whatever, Kuno-{Baby : baby}," Nabiki said as
Kuno ran off.
Well, first the teacher sent him to the hall,
then he
ran off.
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