Mark Gunther wrote:

Now, as much as I like a good bit of C&C, you didn't even say whether you
liked it or not. And having random editing comments is not my idea of a C&C.
Did you like the story or not? And why or why not?

It could have some potential.  Among the hundreds of Ranma stories that I have
read I haven't seen any that make much of an effort to believably hook up 
Gos with anyone.  However, as should be clear from my comments, I hate what
you've done with Nabiki.  Self sacrificing noble Nabiki was a wonderful twist
the first couple of times I saw her but I'm tired of her now.



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