Hiya!

At last, a yakuza fic that was actually _good_!  I'm usually not too fond of 
the genre, 'cus most yak-fics never come off feeling 'real', or 
something--though I'll admit I doubt I know anything more about the yakuza 
than anyone else.  Maybe because your story downplayed the actual yakuza 
part of the story, and focussed on Hiroshi--an excellent choice for the main 
character--it worked great.  Interesting in seeing another outside take on 
Furikan as well--not as a tough school of ass-kickers, but as a school of 
cross-dressers and weirdos.

I'm not very familiar with Sanctuary, but the interplay between the don and 
Hiroshi was nice.  Not too sure about Hiroshi's big plans for the department 
of Finance, though.  Elimination of coin currency?

Not much to offer in terms of actual C&C.  Noticed a few typos earlier in 
the fic, but nothing really noticable.  Just curious: what was Ranma's big 
surprise?

So, yeah... good story!

-Mike

noakes_m@hotmail.com
http://www.geocities.com/noakes_m

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