And continuing:

$Moving right along...


Playfulness disappeared for a moment as the leather clad woman warned,
"Hold
still. I don't want to scratch you."

$Accidentally, at any rate.

Heh. Good point.

Feeling a wave of trust wash over her, Mitsuki went against her
self-preservation instincts and remained motionless.

$Actually, that usually goes along with self-preservation.

Hmm. You are right. Hadn't thought of it that way.

Miss Ra grabbed the collar of Mitsuki shirt and began cutting through it
with the blade. The instrument was sharp, and after a tiny bit of sawing
through the collar, the knife slid easily through the rest of the
fabric.
The blade went through the center of the bra next. Miss Ra pulled the
sliced
garments aside, revealing Mitsuki's flesh to the air.

$Ouch.  There went a yen or two.  I guess the bra wasn't an underwire.

No.

Mitsuki was too stunned to say anything as she felt the air upon her
naked
flesh. Goosebumps sprang up along every inch of where her shirt had been
parted. Her silence only lasted until Miss Ra brought the knife up to
the
skirt. "Don't cut that! It's one of my favorites."

$Heheh.  She's a girl to the end.

Thanks. I thought it would be an amusing touch. I have yet to meet a woman
that wasn't pre-genetically disposed to caring about clothing more than the
man in their lives. :)

"Cut away," Mitsuki tried saying happily, wincing all the while on the
inside. She really liked that skirt.

$*shakes head*

What, you can see it too? :)

Miss Ra laughed and tossed it toward the door. "I'll be keeping it as a
spoil of war. If you ask nicely, I'll let you borrow it from time to
time."

"You can't do that!"

$Heh.  Mitsuki needs lots of training.

Yeah, well, the only person that can really crack the whip on her and make
her docile was the Professor.

Rather than being chafed, Mitsuki instead felt her arousal double at the
closest contact the two had had since this morning. She wanted Rara, or
whoever was in the driver's seat, to keep doing that until her skin was
rubbed raw.

$Heh.  It's like a full body exfoliator.

Pretty much

She leaned her face forward ran a tongue up under Mitsuki's jaw, trailed
it
across her chin until stopping at her lips. Once there, she pulled her
tongue back in and kissed Mitsuki. It was tender, full of caring and
love.

$*snerk*  Of course.  Heheh, sure.

That one. It's a bit over the top, but I am trying to set the mood.

"Or it can be vicious." This time Miss Ra grabbed Mitsuki roughly by the
back of her head and forced her head forward as far as it would go.

$'Ats the way!

Ah, the times I have been tied up and....

It's best we don't go there.

"Or it can be nothing." And with that Miss Ra rose off Mitsuki's body
and
stood up. She headed directly to the door without a backward glance, the
bright red of the wig flopping back and forth across her almost bare
backside. Her hand fell on the handle and the sound of the lock clicked
out
of place.

$That's the scary one.

Mitsuki S would agree.

cast a disdainful look over her shoulder. "Are you sure you want me to
stay?
I could just leave. I'll let you simmer in your own juices for the night
and
release you in the morning. I won't touch you again. Really, it's no
problem."

$The hell it ain't.

What, afraid it'll bring a premature end to the fic? :)

A look of profound relief crossed Miss Ra's features. It was quickly
replaced with predatory gleam. She closed the door and locked it behind
her.
She then went back to Mitsuki's and straddled her again. "Agreed. Now
shut
that trap of yours and let me go to work."

$She should never have removed that gag.

True, but the Mitsuki S dialogue adds a dimension I want.

"Really?" Miss Ra looked down at Mitsuki's breasts again. "Why don't I
make
a more intensive examination and judge for myself?" She leaned forward,
moved the long mane of her wig over her shoulder and out of the way, and
began sucking on Mitsuki's nipples.

$Needs a soundtrack.  Something with a simple bass line.

Oddly, I can see that. Now that I've ever watched an actual porn or
anything. I'm a good boy. :)

Rather than blurting out a "Yes," Mitsuki considered the statement. Miss
Ra
was correct but not entirely so. "I wish he was here also, not in place
of
you, if that doesn't sound too perverted."

$Oh, it does, but no one's complaining.

The joys of fanservice.

Despite never having a romantic encounter of any sort, much less one
that
involved another woman, Mitsuki knew what Miss Ra wanted.

$Money, power, eternal youth.  You know, the usual.

True.

leather-clad girl made certain her head was raised up high enough for
Mitsuki to watch her facial expressions. She pouted a bit as she
directed
her attention to Mitsuki's panty covered crotch. She fingered the
underwear.

$Mitsuki: That's all well and good, but that's not what you're supposed
to finger.

Heh

"These are damp."

$Mumblemumbleoveractivebladdermumble.

Double, heh.

"I'm not wet yet," Miss Ra said casually. "But we'll get to that later.
Right now, these things have to go." Not bothering with a knife this
time,
Miss Rah simply gripped the cotton panties firmly and ripped them off.
She

$Rah Rah Rah!  You go girl!

I knew I'd screw that up and one would slip by.

And underwear rarely rips that easily, unless it's cheap silk.

True. Was doing it more for mood than having to slice open another part of
her wardrobe.

was what I was looking for." She ran her hand through Mitsuki's pubic
hair.
"Hmm, you could use a bit of grooming. You're getting a bit of a tangle
down
here."

$The hedge clipper scene from Scary Movie springs to mind here.

Just plain wrong.

Miss Ra directed a smile to Mitsuki's crotch. "Actually, I think I
prefer it
a bit bushy. Don't trim too much." Without any further teasing, Miss Ra
leaned forward and applied her tongue into the soft folds of Mitsuki's
pussy.

$Then immediately leaned back, wiping at her mouth.  "Ack, hair.  I
take it back, try a wax job."

Heh

place."

"Just hurry," Mitsuki ordered. Then she saw the warning glare Miss Ra
gave
her. She quickly added, "Please, oh Mistress of Pleasure."

"Don't be sarcastic," Miss Ra warned.

$Heheh.  The hardest part about role playing like that is keeping
yourself from grinning or laughing at an inappropriate moment.

True.

This time when Miss Ra crawled on top of Mitsuki, she straddled her

head.
Bringing her hand behind Mitsuki's head, she forced it up and into the
space
between her thighs. "Now be a good girl and start putting that quick
tongue
of yours to work.

$I like the double meaning there.  Mitsuki has been getting the best
lines of the fic.

It does center from her POV rather than Miss Ra's, except for one scene.
That's normal.

sun
and she was trying to prevent a dozen trails of melted liquid from
rolling
off the scoop and hitting the ground.

$Heh.  Heh, again.

I've admitted I'm bad with metaphors. Besides, how many can you use in a
lemon that haven't been overused already. At least I skipped 'velvety folds
of flesh'

those really hard to reach spots. It amazed Miss Ra that Mitsuki could
be so
energetic, but then she remembered the temper the bound girl could
display
and how quick she could be with her tongue in oral matters of a
different
sort.

$Don't think you need that explaination.  We got it from the double
meaning earlier.

Agree.

For Miss Ra, things seemed to be really getting good when the tongue
lashing
slowed down. "Don't stop."

"My mongues mired," Mitsuki mumbled from below.

$Heh.  Another sad fact of life that rarely makes it into lemons.

I thought it would be a cute touch.

Miss Ra looked back at Mitsuki's pussy. "I noticed. You're a lucky
little
thing. Ah well. I guess it means you're going to have to practice a lot
in
order to learn what it takes to satisfy me. But as long as you put your
heart in it, and move your tongue to the left, that's all that matters."

$Heh.  Nice addition.

One must keep one's attention on important matters.

It figured the whole problem was because of bad directions. Mitsuki used
the
last of her ebbing energies to spear that area with her tongue. It felt
like
she was going to dislocate her jaw with how far she had it worked in.

$Not to mention that her face was completely covered in a mix of female
juices and saliva.

Mitsuki S: And just think of all the calories I've consumed! I'll get fat!

Mitsuki was about to go further to the left when she heard a cry from
above
and felt something wet splatter in her mouth. It wasn't a huge amount of
come, but it had caught her off-guard. She forced her head out of Miss
Ra's
hands and coughed once, preventing the small amount of fluid from going
down
the wrong pipe.

$That'd be hell to explain to a doctor.

No. Hamsters in your colon would be hell to explain. Or anything that
involves the phrase "How the hell did they get a vibrator in that hole?'

"A few more times?" Mitsuki moaned, then noted something odd about Miss
Ra's
speech pattern as well as her tone of voice. "Mitsuki?"

$Actually, if her tongue was that tired, it'd be something more like,
"Moar?" she slurred.  "Mithusi?"

Nah. Too over the top, I think. Just mentioning the tired tongue bit worked.

"Of course I... am." Mitsuki Rara stared at her cousin perched beneath
her
thighs. "How very odd. I am Mitsuki Sanada, but I feel like Miss Ra
too."

$Heck, she wasn't very crazy at all.  One good rugmunching session and
she sane again.

Kazuki's doing. He wished for a more perfect union, and got it.

Rara considered that. "I'm not sure. I guess I feel like I usually do,
but
more confident, and sure of myself. I don't feel as timid as I usually
am. I
know everything Miss Ra thought and felt, but there's no separation
anymore.
It's like it's always been me the entire time."

$Okay, my willing suspension of disbelieve is a little strained, but
not too badly.

Again, this is Kazuki's doing. Had it not been for the power he wielded, I
would never have made her MPD problem so easily solved.

"Got any inclinations of walking up and down my back in those jackboots
of
yours?"

$Hehehe.

My favorite pick up line. I use it all the time. :)

Rara gave a radiant smile. "You could probably talk me into it. It does
sound like it might be fun to try out once or twice, but I really don't
feel
like it at the moment. I don't know how to explain it, other than I feel
much more whole than before. It feels good. Very, very good."

$Afterglow.  That magical moment when everything is right with the
world.

Well, that and more, as Mitsuki S is about to explain.

Rara considered that. "I think you sparked my interest when you felt me

up
in the bath."

"And that was the first time?"

$Well, you never felt me up before.  Unless you did it while I was
asleep.  I don't know, have you?

Hehehe.

"What are you getting at?"

Mitsuki finally forced herself to say the words. "I think our getting
together was Kazuki's doing."

$Heheh.  Kazuki was the man.  That's exactly the kind of person I would
trust with reality.  He apparently did a good job, too, because it was
only a few days before they would up in bed together.

Yep. Even if he didn't know he was wishing for it at the time.

Silence met that statement. Then Rara held a hand up to her mouth and
began
laughing. "That's the silliest thing I've ever head. Kazuki's not that
sort
of pervert. He would have tried something with us or Yayoi by now if he
was."

$He's got patience, and knows they'll come around eventually.  Deep
under that somewhat weenieish exterior lurks the  cold, calculating mind
of a horny teenager.

Heh.

"I knew that was going to come out wrong!" Mitsuki growled. "I know
that. I
agree, sort of. I don't believe for one second he would consciously
tamper
with us like that; he's way too nice a guy. But I think maybe he might
have
subconsciously did it when he remade the world."

$Actually, everything, including their 'real' memories, was false.  The
real Kazuki was a greedy, selfcentered bastard who would stop at nothing
to remodel the universe as he saw fit.  And he succeeded.

Now that would be a neat twist. Potentially dark one, but interesting.

She tried saying no, but couldn't force the words out. With a resolve
that
was more reminiscent of Miss Ra than Mitsuki Rara, she softly said, "Do
you
think he's placed us in each other's arms because he wants Yayoi and
doesn't
want to us to be hurt and alone?"

$Heh.  The concept of heterosexual healing wouldn't occur to him
because this is a lemon.  ^_^

Heh. Not quite.

$one of us he wanted

conclusion that if we liked each other, we'd get along really well and
then
he could have both of us without one getting angry or resentful at the
other."

$It's funny how often indecisive weenies managed to arrange that.  ^_-

It's a staple of anime and manga. Reminds me, I've gotta get the time to
watch the rest of Love Hina.

Rara looked at Mitsuki aghast. After the statement set in, she found she
couldn't help smiling in return. "That would be just like Kazuki to try
and
spare our feeling while wanting both of us without having to admit it.
Oh,

$o/~ Feelings... o/~

Not that song, please.

Rara breathed a sigh of relief. "That was more eloquent that I could
have
managed,

$Especially with an exhausted tongue.

That too.

Happy beyond belief, Rara said, "So now that we've settled things
between us
and how we feel about Kazuki, all we have left to do is inform him that
we've come to this mutual agreement for a three-way relationship."

$Not ask, inform.  Very important part of this kind of situation.

Yep. That was intentional on her part.

As Mitsuki toyed with the restraint in her hand, she reflected on the
events
of the day. She was forced to admit that when she woke up this morning,
she
had been completely wrong.

It did feel like a brave new world after all.

$And it had been a hell of a day.

I wanted to add that in, but it would have been forced. So it was only a
hell of a morning and afternoon. :)

$Kazuki's first words upon discovering that they had just had sex
together and now wanted to share him were, "Already?  I didn't think
it'd be this qui...  Whoops."

But luckily, they'll forgive him. HE wouldn't have had it any other way. :)

xxxxxxxxxxxxx

Got a bit heavier than I originally envisioned, especially with
Mitsuki's
reflections on her behavior, but I prefer it to the lighter version I
had in
mind. it was rather fun taking a look inside her head to get a better
grasp

$It was rather

Thanks.

^_-

for her motivations. It meant cutting back on the lemon bits more, but
it
was always going to be more of a story with lemon in it than a lemon
with a
little story in it. Hope you enjoyed.

$Quite, quite.  The OOCness did make sense, what with the remaking of
the world and all.

Hence why I did mentioned it. If you want to do a M/M lemon in this, and
make it 'realistic' Kazuki's wielding of those godlike powers he had was the
best way to do it, especially in a one shot.

The only inaccuracies I noticed in the whole thing

was the funky nocturnal squirrel and Mitsuki's wonder-tongue which could
deliver oratory after orgasm.

Few more typos towards the end, but very clean overall.  Lots of fun,
and glad I read.

What's up next?  The wishfic?  Or more Avenging?

Unknown. I'm working on a private piece that's only going out to a few
people. After that, hard to say. Nothing for a while since I still have to
do more C+C (can finally finish PoE) and a few other things. And then I have
some new stuff to watch that I've been meaning to for a while, like the rest
of LH. Don't expect anything for a while, unless the muse grabs me by the
back of the head and forces my fingers to type. It's just a question of
time, not motivation. Might jump ahead to 'The Things We Wish For...' since
I think I've finally figured out how to work the second chapter with a
decent flow and still keep the humor in it.

D.B. Sommer.

(Who just read something that was both hilarious and sad at the same time. A
pity it wasn't meant to be either). :(

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