Benjamin Goldberg wrote:

Hmm, I'm not much for giving C&C, but...

It would be a bit more interesting if there were at least one person who
was offered the chance to be a genie, but who refused.

Also, each of the recruitments seems nearly identical, providing little
to the story, making this seem more prologueish than chapter oneish.  If
you were doing this as a real story, you wouldn't need to show all
eight, just a few of them in the prologue, and then do flashbacks of the
others in chapters one and two.Yes it is reppetittios isn't it?  ^_^

I did forget to put in a line on my post.  If any one wants to take this 
idea and go with it they have my blessing.  I just want to see what is 
done with it.  <sigh>  I've got enough on my plate

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