Subject: [FFML] Re: [Xover multiple] Genie Academy |
From: Benjamin Goldberg |
Date: 4/28/2002, 6:31 PM |
To: mathews1@gte.net |
CC: Fanfiction Mailing List <ffml@anifics.com> |
Hmm, I'm not much for giving C&C, but... It would be a bit more interesting if there were at least one person who was offered the chance to be a genie, but who refused. Also, each of the recruitments seems nearly identical, providing little to the story, making this seem more prologueish than chapter oneish. If you were doing this as a real story, you wouldn't need to show all eight, just a few of them in the prologue, and then do flashbacks of the others in chapters one and two.-- print reverse( ",rekcah", " lreP", " rehtona", " tsuJ" )."\n"; .---Anime/Manga Fanfiction Mailing List----. | Administrators - ffml-admins@anifics.com | | Unsubscribing - ffml-request@anifics.com | | Put 'unsubscribe' in the subject | `---- http://ffml.anifics.com/faq.txt -----'