Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C]PoE Omake + Author's Notes
From: Brian Randall
Date: 4/28/2002, 4:38 PM
To: Michael A Chase
CC: Innocent Bystanders <FFML@anifics.com>


Michael A Chase wrote:
Suggested changes: {before : after}

On Fri, 26 Apr 2002 11:35:59 -0700 Brian Randall <brian@azurite.org> wrote:

       If I haven't responded to your e-mails yet, it's because I'm going to a 
con this weekend; I'll be back on Monday. :p

Just go, enjoy the con.  Don't worry about us.  Sniff.

	Operation 'Post the final chapter and epilogues and then run off to the 
con like a frightened schoolgirl' was largely unsuccessful. ^_^;; The 
e-mails were all still waiting for me when I got back.

       Or even not as an outtake, although it's probably too late to have this 
happen before Ran-oh-ki transforms and no longer (I'm presuming) needs 
to eat metal.  Of course, he could like it as much as the other two 
cabbits like carrots, and continue to do so anyway.

Maybe he'd like a small snack.

	Like Mihoshi's ship. I imagine Kintaro would protect the toilet. �_�

       Eimi offering to sing to Terry is a reference to HAL from 2001: A Space 
Odyssey.

I saw that and wondered why she ddn't sing Bicycle Built for Two.  Having
the song fade away as a reaver gets to her core would have been a real tear jerker.

	Ack! It could have been, but I'm not sure how to work that in... now. I 
think it's for the best that I leave that scene as it is, for the time. 
Terry is one of the actual unlucky few who didn't manage to live through 
this whole mess. :/

	Thanks (again) again for all of the C&C and commentary throughout the 
course of the story. It's been a _huge_ help.

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