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This is a nice start. I look forward to seeing more.
On Sun, 21 Apr 2002 23:41:24 -0500 The Eternal Lost Lurker
<lurkerdrome@sbcglobal.net> wrote:
The blond pointed to the viewscreen. "That ship out there went off-course
when their engines messed up, and they're fixing the problem but kinda got {s
talled : stalled}, and there was a big meteor coming right at them!" She beamed
sunnily. "But I destroyed the meteor, so everything's okay now."
"Oh, she's still asleep," Mihoshi said. "She got really drunk last night,
and then didn't get a lot of sleep because she slept with some guy she met
at a bar, and we had an early emergency call so she was really tired and
hung over, and then I blew up a moon and she was mad, then she was mad
because it was Sunday and we weren't late for work, so then she went to bed
and I got bored so I decided to come over here."
That's one euphemism I've always wondered about. There'd be a lot less
trouble if people who slept together just slept.
As the ditzy detective changed and crashed on her futon, Kiyone sat at the
table, mind whirling. *Ranma...I didn't expect to ever see you again after
last night. Now...it looks like I'll probably be seeing you again after
all.* She looked down at her ramen cup. *Do I want to? Would he want to see
me? Oh...what am I gonna do about this?*
So far, she seems more formal than someone who'd think 'gonna'.