--- "Django Wexler" <dwexler@andrew.cmu.edu> wrote:
Here's the next two. I'm pretty convinced nobody reads this, aside from
the few who've already read the whole thing, but I suppose I'll finish
just for completeness' sake. Five more chapters to go.
Hey, I'm reading it! And I don't usually read Sailor Moon fics.
This one is rather good. Just the right blend of menace and mystery. Quite frankly, I'm still confused by Eridu's role in the whole mess. As of this section, it appears that he is neither Resh nor Jahara, and is unlikely to be associated with either. Oh well, I guess I'll have to wait until you release more of it to find out.
I haven't noticed any grammar problems, which either means that there aren't any or the story is good enough for me to ignore them. Either way, good job.
As always, http://bloodgod.res.cmu.edu/smgray/index.html is the
homepage. Tell me if there are any problems with it.
Random note: I'm writing a sequel, mostly as practice for myself in a
few different modes. Anyone interested in prereading give me a private
message.
I would definitely like to read the sequel, but am unlikely to have the time needed to give you detailed C&C.
Sorry I can't provide any specific comments on the story itself, but, honestly, I don't know what to say other than 'keep up the good work.'
Django Wexler (khaine)
khaine@mindless.com
Proof Method #6: Proof by application of superior firepower.
*presses button* BOOOOOOM!!!! => P = NP.
Somehow, I doubt my prof would accept that, were I to write it on the final.
Just out of curiousity, what are the first five proof methods?
Defender of the Light
Elite Mage
junior member of the Inner Circle of the Mages Council
Contrary to popular opinion, magic and science do mix.
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