KASUMI: Well, I think Ranma is nice! And that New York accent of his is
cute too.

NABIKI: What New York accent?

KASUMI: Didn't you catch it? He referred to Genma Saotome as his
"fodder."

*ahem* Anyway. :)

Quick correction: The title should say Tendos' rather than Tendo's, as
there are more than one Tendo.

Funny concept, though the timing seemed a bit off to me. It goes for
quite a while without any hint of Ranma's new, er, culinary preferences
(there is the "meat on the butcher's block" referemce, but that's easily
missed) and then it hits us with a lot of it all at once. You might work
on introducing the idea a little more gradually. Apart from this qualm,
I liked it, and I think the diary format worked well.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.akane.org/gary/comics.html

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