Subject: [FFML] Re: [Fanfic] The Slayers: Reward Chapter 13
From: Michael A Chase
Date: 4/20/2002, 11:34 PM
To: FFML <ffml@anifics.com>, Lord Archive <archive@mich.com>


Suggested changes: {before : after}
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Give a hobbit a fish and he eats fish for a day.
Give a hobbit a ring and he eats fish for an age.

On Sat, 20 Apr 2002 22:28:37 -0400 Lord Archive <archive@mich.com> wrote:

Shortly after sunrise, a black tornado signaled Xellos's appearance as
it formed in the hallway of Sairaag's only standing inn. The mazoku
blinked curiously. While the lack of noise was a good indication that
Lina and crew were no longer there, his inhuman senses also failed to
pick up the band of adventures. Xellos could only tell that they were
somewhere in Sairaag, since if they were any distance away from this
town he could pick up their presence. However, thanks to Fibrizo being
ruined here, along with remnant energies of {kopi : copy}-Rezo's spell that
destroyed the city, the holy tree and the demon beast Zanaffar, it made
tracking anyone in this area difficult even, for a mazoku of his level.

I can live with kopi, but I don't see what purpose it serves.

"You cheating son {: of} a bitch," Lina cursed.

Ravven, however, was still playing dodge as the one golem after him
tried to turn him into paste. He seemed to freeze for a moment as the
rocky punch screamed toward {: him}, but he leapt out of the way at the last
second.

"Amelia has a plan, but we need to keep him busy," Gourry answered.

"She better not be planning anything foolish," Zelgadis muttered.

Amelia planning something foolish?  Tell me it ain't so. :}b

Zelgadis's mouth dropped as Amelia stood up proudly {display : displaying} the amulet.
He cursed his existence as the bright and perky face he had grown to
love was now a dull gray. Her shining raven black hair still shined, but
that was because it had become black metallic wire.

Amelia clenched her eyes shut as she poured everything into her legs,
trying to out {run : outrun} the mazoku. She could feel his presence mere
centimeters from her exposed back.

"What can I say? I'm a sucker for troubled romances," Xellos quipped.

He likes getting them in trouble, right?

"High Priest Towermere, I believe you are mistaken. It can't be
Ceiphied's will that Sir Gourry marry Princess Alicia," Syphiel {voiced :
pronounced : said}.

"Shut up!" Towermere barked. "This isn't just about her marriage. It's
about her consorting with {demon : demons : a demon}, letting Xellos have his way with you,
and turning Princess Amelia into a monster!"




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