Well, that was... weird.
The only thing I noticed was this:
"We...we got hold of some Nanniichuan water. The last of it. There was
enough...enough for two. He went first..." The lost boy swallowed. "At
first...we thought there'd been a mistake. That it was just normal water
after all, or Nyanniichuan. He was still a girl.
Why's Ryouga explaining that there was enough for two and Ranma went first
with Akane standing there? Even under such strained conditions, it should
be automatic for him to cover, I'd think.
Jim