I am always looking forward to reading more of this title. I hope you can
carry it to its conclusion.
I also noticed that you have no catchy title for this chapter yet.
"A nearly frictionless landing of an object of obvious biological
origin...."
Biologial or non-biological origin? Artificial or natural? You depicted Ami
saying this as if she was delivering a weather report. If she really meant
biological, then her next reply would have been more than "It means it's
very strange.".
Maybe they weren't really brother and sister. Maybe they were fakes of
some kind.
She's getting better...
She had promised herself to start thinking occasionally, but it couldn't
always work, could it?
But still not there yet.
"So I got the wallet off of that evil guy who was trying to control
your friend", explained Usagi.
"Wow, that's some story", said Naru.<<
Correct me if I'm wrong but Naru was there at the tennis court when Usagi
defeated Nephrite. Usagi even showed the wallet to her at the time. Have
them talk about something else.
But there was no need to wait for them before acting; certainly the
monsters wouldn't.
Not 'no need to wait' but 'no time to wait'.
Monster tentacles shouldn't just make innocent girls scream.
drop the 'just'
until just the moment when the monster tore the door off of its hinges.
At that second, it was wide open to an attack. Sailor Moon removed the
tiara from her head and threw it into the creature. <<
Excellent tactical decision! At least shes got this kind of thinking down
pat.
Usagi, if it's them, they couldn't possibly have gotten all the paperwork
they needed to pretend to live here and let them go to school. Not in a
day.
Even if they did make fake IDs on their ship.<<
Let this be a lesson to Luna. Next time Usagi should have Ami check out any
new arrivals if monsters start appearing soon after the newbies show up.
Why don't we come to the park and talk a little more?"
"They tore down the park a few days ago..."
Then there's no possibility he could have known that the park ever existed.
They could also see me talking to a cat even out here.
You mean they haven't already?
"A tree tainted by evil bears bitter fruit!" intoned Tuxedo Mask.
Awfully perceptive of him. And Usagi doesn't even know that they're facing a
tree yet.
You needed love from them, and you forgot to tell them? You couldn't even
leave a note or something? I know they can read.
How was it supposed to do that? Etch it on its trunk with a branch?
Three new allies, all in all, a most satisfactory conclusion!
I'd rather ask you now and get you a little mad than be right and have the
Dark Kingdom blackmail you about it.
Now this is an impressive bit of long range thinking...
Hi... The kanji in 'Mars'
No, it's 'fire'. Mars is 'Fire Star' in several Asian languages including
chinese and japanese it seems.
'Ai' seems to have something to do with Venus, but it's the wrong kanji.
'Ai' is 'love', which is what Venus is frequently associated with.
I wonder what would happen to Seijuro and Natsumi if they told.
Some Men in Black might come in and cart them away?
She could see possibilities; she could push things in certain directions;
but her influence was limited.
But Pluto can see the past can't she? She might even be able to see into the
Dark Kingdom and know what happened to it.
If that repeated year never happened, the Black Moon would be happening
fairly soon. Small Lady should appear *now*.
I was going talk about chronology here, then I realise I couldn't make heads
or tails of your explaination of the non-repeated year. So I'll just leave
it to you to decide who appears when. Are you going to get on with the Moon
Crystal hunt now? Did Chibi-usa carry another message with her? Will Usagi
finally face more cunning enemies?
Can't wait to find out. How long till the next chapter?
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