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----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Danna Sean" <carrotglace@mindspring.com>
To: <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Monday, April 15, 2002 21:56
Subject: [FFML] Ranma: Mazoku Factor[Part 2][R.5/Slayers]

    Ranma sat on the porch of the Tendo home watching the
{Rain : rain}. He had his usual grin on his face as he nursed the cup
of tea in his hands. He seemed quite content actually, of
course, the one person who bothered him the most in the home
came to speak with him. He grimaced as the girl walked up to
him.

    Ranma was watching the cloud of dust that occupied where
he had {once : just} been standing. "I see."

    "If that's true it's {you're : your} own fault," replied the
ponytailed boy calmly.

    "What's going on?" muttered Akane as she stepped {back :}
away from the battle for a moment.

    "So he's mad that {he beat you : you beat him}? Big deal!" grumbled
Nabiki irritably.

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