Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C][fanfic][lemon][Dual!] Gestalt 1+3
From: "DB Sommer" <sommer@3rdm.net>
Date: 4/15/2002, 10:01 PM
To: "Michael A Chase" <mchase@ix.netcom.com>
CC: <ffml@anifics.com>


I'll combine the two emails here. Might not be able to get to everyone's
tonight, though.


As Mitsuki continued walking, she noticed a billboard of Natsumi Ayakawa,
one of the top models in Japan, dressed in a tiny bikini and {hocking :
hawking} s

Oops. Silly mistake there.

ome
sort of vacation to a tropical paradise. Mitsuki's first reaction was to
think the bikini's cream color was just plain awful and how she wouldn't
be
caught dead in such a thing. The second was that she should pick up some
suntan lotion since she had nearly run out the last time she had gone
sunbathing. Hardly the thoughts a lesbian would have when looking at a
supermodel, at least in her book.

It sounds like Mitsuki's problem isn't lesbianism, but self-love.

Someone else mentioned it was the ultimate in narcissism in that's she's
fallen in love with herself. :)


Note to self:  When talking to self, keep quiet.   I heard that! :})

Heh.

And on to the third part.

Miss Ra went back to caressing Mitsuki's face. "Curious. I feel better
now
than I would have if I had taken my revenge. Although if you ever try
anything like that again." She moved her hand from the face down to a
breast. Through the material she felt around until her fingers found the
{tips : tip}

I had problems with plurals in this work. I caught a half dozen on my
revisions.

Thanks for the help. You sure do keep plugging away with this stuff. ^_^

D.B. Sommer




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