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From: "Thryth" <thrythlind@yahoo.com>
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Sent: Sunday, April 07, 2002 06:24
Subject: [FFML] [R.5/OMG]Marriage Wishes 1

   Urd blinked a little dazedly, trying to decide
whether to be elated or depressed.  On the one hand,
the wish she had been told to grant had just given her
the go ahead to mettle in the "Love octagon from
hell."  On the other hand, the wish her subject, one
Nodoka Saotome, had made just gave her an almost
unreachable goal.

I always thought of it a love many sided irregular solid.

   "Bingo!" Urd said.  "So...now...I have to find a
way for all of us to willing enter into a multiple
marriage that ALL of us will be happy with."  The
multiple part wasn't really bothering Urd that much.
It was the MARRIAGE part that was giving her fits {of
hesistance :: of hesitancy}.

   "There is a remote chance that all of you COULD {: have}
decided you want this," Belldandy finished.  "I am
sorry, Urd, I asked Peorth to find an assignment to
let you back into work gently.  She said she would try
to find one."

   In any case, Urd's momentary distraction {is : was} why she
didn't realize where she was until it was too late.

   Urd beat down her worry quickly and placed a mask
of determination over her face.  She was only a second
class goddess, but it wasn't for lack of power as
Belldandy had said.  Still, {: it was} two demons, demons she
could feel were quite powerful as well.

   "RANMA!!!  PREPARE TO DIE!!!" Ryouga shouted
swinging {out with :} his umbrella.  Ranma casually dodged
under it.

   "Well," Urd said with a smirk, something in the
back of her {name : mind} nagging her about the name Shampoo.
"I hadn't considered that."
   Shampoo's eye arched as she slipped out of Urd's
grip and stood up to charge {forward :} at the recovering
demons.  Ranma and Ryouga were quickly beside her and
the three martial artists didn't give their obviously
powerful {: ally} time to totally recover.

  "Who were you looking for?" the chef asked, and {she : he}
began to draw on her chi reserves.  Urd blinked for a
moment.

We know the chef is Ukyo and a girl, but Urd hasn't figured it out yet.

   "Well," Urd said.  "For one thing, they aren't
serious.  They were just looking to get a rise out of
you.  For another, it might mean that if {: you} do lean that
way that your friends won't instantly abandon you."

   "Oh, but that's one of the girls she's supposed to
marry, Skuld," Belldandy said.  Skuld and Urd froze.

I've been figuring that the Ultimate Force has been at work here.  I don't
think Urd is usually so unaware.  It is also something of a coincidence that
the people she made such direct contact with happen to be the ones she needs
to marry.



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