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From: "Thryth" <thrythlind@yahoo.com>
To: "FFML mailing list" <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Thursday, April 11, 2002 20:21
Subject: [FFML] [OMG/R.5]Marriage Wishes 2 [Repost]

*Since lots of people seem to have problems finding
it...*

*Warning: contrived coincidences will appear at almost
random*

I just figured it was the Ultimate Force in action.

"Oh it was just a little spell," Urd said. "It's just
meant to release a little of what she's been
repressing." She paused a moment and considered. "The
effect WILL be stronger proportional to how repressed
she is or was and how much she tries to continue to
repress anything. And it'll reach its peak by sunset
and be worn off before sunrise. Ten to one she barely
notices anything beyond a couple of extra-vivid
daydreams. How repressed and stubborn could she
possibly be?"

Oh my.  Stronger in proportion to how repressed she was...

After following Ukyou, and bumping into a few things
on the way by virtue of not watching where she was
going, Akane reached the {girl's : girls'} restroom with her
friend and rival.

"Akane...why are you looking at me like {: that}?" Ukyou's
voice asked.

"Naww..." Urd said as she knocked on the door. "Who
would believe that."

Well, they would.

"Father," Kasumi called out. "You and Saotome-san {have
visitors : a visitor}!"

"To tell you the truth," Urd said. "I'm obligated to
marry about six people, that's the mess. So I'll have
to see what I can work out. Anyway, {you're : your} tribe just
might gain a powerful ally if this works out.

Still, as Cologne read on, a broad smile began to
stretch over her face. If this letter was the genuine
article, then that meant the {bearing : bearer} was much more
than a mere sorceress. And if she was willing to {: join in} a
marriage, it would certainly make the tribe much more
powerful indeed.

She reached to accept the pudding when suddenly Yuka
seemed to trip and the pudding container flew through
the air and landed on Akane's {heading : head}, virtually
exploding as a thick covering of chocolate covered her
naked body and quickly hardened.

"Gee," Ranma said. "You sound like me whenever I get
glomped or something." Akane blushed deeper and
clenched her fists tight. She'd have to LOOK at him if
she wanted to {: pound} him, and see those beautiful deep eyes
staring back into hers as if they were a whole
universe lonely and apart seeking the perfect match in
a great...

She was just realizing she probably should have
checked over the prospective Valkyrie's letter for
anything Urd didn't want out. Such as the fact that
this letter was written yesterday rather than ten
years ago, before she died.

Valley Amazon.

"My thanks, Urd-san," Kodachi said cautiously,
calculatingly. "Perhaps we can even remedy {yesterdays : yesterday's}
lack."

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