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Mac :})
Give a hobbit a fish and he eats fish for a day.
Give a hobbit a ring and he eats fish for an age.
----- Original Message -----
From: "Danna Sean" <carrotglace@mindspring.com>
To: <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Thursday, April 11, 2002 01:21
Subject: [FFML] Gaijin[Part 17][Fixed]

    The day had just started, and he had much to do. Revenge was sweet
indeed, and his target was somewhere inside the city. As {where : were}

the

senshi, he owed his creators that much at least. He would carry out
the task of destroying them for the man who had allowed him his
revenge. Then his debt would be cleared.

    The boy's hand shot out and a {think : thin} wire snagged one of the

nearby

buildings. He swung skillfully down to the sidewalk and landed with
Michiru safely.

    "At once. He may still have his uses {too : to : for} us."

    He slowly raised his eyes to stare at the tiny frozen picture of
the monster. "Damn. I knew this Spiderman thing was a bad idea."

No good dead goes unpunished after all.



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