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Give a hobbit a fish and he eats fish for a day.
Give a hobbit a ring and he eats fish for an age.
----- Original Message -----
From: "Danna Sean" <carrotglace@mindspring.com>
To: <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Tuesday, April 09, 2002 03:14
Subject: [FFML] Ranma:Mazoku Factor[Part 2][R.5/Slayers]

    The students in the room gave a collective blink and turned {too : to}
look at each other. The last thing the teacher remembered before
seeing nothing but a huge dust cloud was the sound of chairs and desks
squeaking against the floor.

    "Take your seats please," he muttered lamely {at : to} the empty room.

    "Can't you just say yes?" said Ranma as he continued to grin
{again :}.

    The girl blinked in surprise and turned around. Ranma was getting
{too : to} his feet with a slightly uncomfortable look on his face. "They
aren't going to overhear me now."

    "Blew it!" said Ranma cheerfully as he poked her in the forehead
and sent her {too : to : onto} her rear.

The boy turned {too : to} look at him, a bandana covered most of his
forehead, despite it his hair hung almost below his eye line. He had
no bags, no supplies and his clothes had seen better days. The only
thing on his face, was a sinister looking grin as the animal charged
forward. He raised his hands and put it up in a halting gesture.

    The animal ignored him and his grin widened a bit, revealing two
fangs that protruded over his lips. "Get out of my way." His words
were quiet as he stood his ground {as : while} the boar neared him.

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