Rather belatedly, I just realized that the title of your story is
actually "An _Anime_ Fan Fiction". If it's based on the Ranma !/" anime,
you can safely disregard my comments, as I'm only familiar with the
manga. I'm obviously pretty dense. Sorry to have bothered you, and best
of luck with your writing.

Elin,

(who really should pay attention before posting)

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