----- Original Message -----
From: "Donald Lee Granberry" <noharness@mac.com>
To: "KaraOhki" <karaohki@snet.net>; <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Wednesday, April 03, 2002 2:34 PM
Subject: [FFML] Re: [fanfic][Tenchi/Ranma]Finding the Lost

June,

For a person who "never writes comedy," you outdid yourself with this

one. I

found one little thing to grump about at the very end.

Don Granberry.

I didn't say never, I just said I wasn't comfortable with it.  I find
writing comedy extremely difficult, and whenever I release something
that's supposed to be funny I expect everyone to tell me it isn't.

*snip*

Ryoga groaned.  Perhaps he should have allowed
Akane to kill him.

Granted, the above sentence is Ryouga thinking to himself, thus it is
technically narrative, but I think the word "maybe" would work better

than

the word "perhaps" in this context.

Good point, thank you.

*HUGE-eyed cabbit pleading stare*  When do I get to read more of your
story?  *sends you carrot cookies as a bribe.*

June




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