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From: "Thryth" <thrythlind@yahoo.com>
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Subject: [FFML] [Ranma/Multi-Cross]Martial Artists and Mayhem: Third Edition
[19]

   "You plan to walk out into the broad daylight and
slip one of those collars around her neck then?" he
asked tauntingly.  "Or maybe {you're : your} spirit can carry
it to her, assuming she doesn't merely tear you
asunder completely this time."

   After a few moments checking over their life
forces, Lina found herself nearly choking in shock.
From what she could tell, each of "her" trio had been
touched in {someway : some way} by at least one other deity.

   If she continued in this quest...there was the very
real chance that she'd {: see : help} them only briefly and then
spend the rest of her life apart from them.

   If Shi-Shio was{, :} in truth moving, then soon{, :} so
would the other Akuma.  Both signs from Xellos and her
own divinations had told her this.  And Xellos had
given her {away : a way} to weaken, or at least forestall, one
of the edges of the coming battle.

   Then Ranma and Akane were just there, within arm's
reach of each of their targets.  As they {through back : threw}
their enemies into the walls, each of them {growling : growled}
angrily and {stalking : stalked} forward, with looks promising
pain.

   "Well, I guess I'd have seen it {eventuall : eventually}," Ranma
said.  "But err..."

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