In a message dated 3/26/02 7:14:49 AM, ffml_use@hotmail.com writes:

The young man suddenly stopped and looked longingly at the shimmering crystal
palace in the distance.  "Mama, I miss you so much."

"Keep moving little girl, we're wasting time."

...Mmmmf...Bwah...HA HA HA HA HA

::Wipes off screen:: Ranma is Rini? (I forget her Japanese name) I love it 
already.

Okay. On the C&C side: You've got quite a few formatting errors, some grammer 
work is needed, and you mispelled tear as tare. I won't bore you with the 
specifics, mostly because what I know about grammer would leak out of a 
thimble. =)

On the plus side, you've got one of the most original ideas for a 
Ranma/Sailor Moon crossover that I've seen and the looming question is: Who 
kidnapped her? My money's on Nodaka.

I do have one point of criticisim. If the point of this fic, is in fact, Rini 
as Ranma, I would suggest moving the age of when she was kidnapped back to 
six or so. It would probably add more impact.

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