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From: "Thryth" <thrythlind@yahoo.com>
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Sent: Sunday, March 24, 2002 05:09
Subject: [FFML] [Ranma]Hengeyokai 9

   Nabiki had no intention of fighting Ranma, but she
wasn't about to let him get away this time.  Besides,
she had support if she was right.  Most sparrows
didn't fly {in :} at night as far as she knew.

Nabiki is definitely the thinker in the house.  Especially more than Ranma.

   Or he could give them a little training.

Big evil grin.

   Akane had long ago passed {up :} Nabiki in the chase
and could see Ranma ahead of her.  She was so close
she could almost feel the heat of his blood on the
night air.

   "Here you go," the {store :} vendor said, smiling as he
passed the shishkabobs to his customer.  "Please
come...AHH!!"  Something small and furry ran past him
and he virtually jumped.  The flash of red leaped up
away from the man onto his cart.
   "What the hell was that?" the customer asked
looking down the {side walk : sidewalk} to the flash of red that
was busily dodging people.

   "Okay," he said.  "A few more minutes and then lose
them.  This attracts {to : too} much attention anyway."  ~But
it certainly is fun, and maybe I need more of that.~
Then the sound of Akane barking could be heard, and
the chase was on again.

   "Your dojo is built on the focus point of that
gate," the woman continued.  "My husband and I were
planning to pay you a visit and help you defend it.
Though I see now somebody else {: already} has."

Finally someone that has some idea of what is happening.



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