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From: "Thryth" <thrythlind@yahoo.com>
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Subject: [FFML] [Ranma]Hengeyokai 8

   "What are you doing, Akane?" Nabiki asked coolly.
Akane turned to her and blinked in confusion.
   "{To school, where : Going to school, what} else?" Akane demanded of

her.

   "Nabiki is right to be cautious," Kasumi said
bringing in breakfast {to set on the table :}.  "Please
sit down, Akane."

   "Oh {father, father, father : Father, Father, Father}," Kasumi sighed,

shaking

her head.  "You should really have thought this
through a little cautiously."  Seeing that Kasumi was
giving him even gentle reproach sent Soun into deeper
paroxyms of grief.

"What is important now is getting that jerk, from {: what} you
say he even let his sister get hurt last night."

   "In any case{: ,} we need information," Nabiki said.  "I
think I know how to get some."

   "More likely he is avoiding the cats for other
reasons," Cologne said.  "{Are : Our} friend Ranma has
suffered the neko-ken training according to his own
mouth."  Shampoo froze in shock, suddenly worried.
"Do not provoke his fear too greatly, and it should
not be a problem.  I dread to think what a creature
like him in the neko-ken would do."

   "Of course{, please, : .}" Kasumi answered.  "{Take : Please take} a
seat."  She accepted the cat, which reluctantly left
Sayuri's grasp to allow itself to be held by a new
human.  Kasumi blushed as the cat sniffed her and
proceeded to happily lick at her hand.

It's a little odd Nabiki didn't recognize Ranma's scent.

   Then the terror came back as Ranma realized where
he was.  In {: the} Tendo tea room.  With the three AWAKENED
Tendo sisters.  In Sayuri's lap.  This was not good,
how had he gone so long undetected.  He didn't think
he could fake a cat aura for much longer than a minute
or two.

   She realized that Akane was going through a hard
time, but so was she{: ,} damn it.  She'd just spent a day
thinking one of her best friends was dying, been
attacked by her other friend, chased through the
streets by a demon and held prisoner by Chinese
barbarians.

   She had finished settling Cat into a bed and was
leaving the room when a rustling alerted her.  She
turned about to see a little red fox with a sheepish
expression look at her apologetically and then jump
out the window.

Still not thinking.  He really should have tried to explain more to her.



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