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From: "Thryth" <thrythlind@yahoo.com>
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Subject: [FFML] [Ranma]Hengeyokai 7

   "You should go home and get some sleep," Dr.

Tofu

said.  "You won't make things go any quicker by
staying {her : here}."

   Cologne sighed and pushed Shampoo's chair legs

{and : an}

inch forward, dropping the former Amazon in a

tangle

of chair and flesh.

   "'Sides," Ranma said.  "It was either I make

'em

like me...or they take 'em.  I know {there : they}

were after

Akane, an' I'm certain they'd like ta add the

other

two to the mix also.  Either that or kill 'em. 

Which

do you think is better?"

   He shifted into a snake and slid out of his

bounds.

 Then shifted back into human form.  He was still

in a

lot of pain, but apparently the old woman had

healed {: him} a

little.  Otherwise he'd still be in bad shape,
increased healing or no.  As it was, another day

of

rest and he'd be good as new.

   That was as far as the middle Tendo was willing

to

go.  She thought that the female Ranma must have
gotten away, but even if she had she was

incredibly

hurt.  If it weren't for the scent of violets
everywhere she thought she could have {maid out :

made out : found} more

information.

   "We're going to have to live with this," Nabiki
said.  "Might as well get used to it.  {An : And}

Ranma's

future reckoning to the Tendo clan aside, we have
bigger problems.  Sit down Akane, I have more bad

news

for you.  This is about Yuka and Sayuri."

Ranma should have talked to Tofu before Nabiki woke
up.  She might not have
believed what he passed through Tofu, but at least
his side would be
available to her.  She was lucky her visit to Yuka's
wasn't detected; she
would have been more cautious if she had more
information.

   Yes, I thought of that, but then decided that Ranma
isn't exactly doing this in the most thoughtful and
well-planned way out there....true to character Ranma
is pretty much just figuring things out on the fly and
sticking his proverbial foot even further into his
proverbial mouth than usual...so decided against it

and yeah...Nabiki was very VERY lucky she didn't get
connected....

but right now the forces arranged as follows

Ranma

the ex-Amazons

the Tendos

the Voidlings/Hannya

Sayuri

Sayuri is not really altogether on anybody's side
right now, and everybody wants a piece of Ranma
(rightfully so), though the ex-Amazons and the Tendos
might be willing to deal with the demons first and
then take some sort of payment from him...Nabiki
doesn't even really think Ranma needs to be hurt as
severely as perhaps Akane and Kasumi would (after all,
she understands the "ends justifying the means" idea
and would probably behave similarly in his
situation...same with Cologne, though Shampoo and
Mousse will be righteously pissed)

=====
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Tribble, Kender Warrior of the Celestial Kingdom
"God has to have a sense of humor, it's the only explanation for sex." - my father
"I have to write a how-to paper for class, so I'm writing a paper on how to be psuedo-evil." - my brother

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