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From: "Danna Sean" <carrotglace@mindspring.com>
To: <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Friday, March 22, 2002 00:50
Subject: [FFML] Spirit Within[Cleaned][Parts 4-8][R.5][Old ^_^]

    "Hello {mom : Mom}," said Ranma.

    "B-but Jusenkyo, the c-curse..." said his mother with a
desperation creeping into her tone.

Ranma hasn't mentioned Jusenkyo or called his condition a curse yet to
Nodoka.

    "You however..." she said as she turned to glare at Genma. The man
began to sweat at this. "Trying to run from {you : your} promise to me?

Eh,

Genma?"

    Genma broke down. "But, but {honey bunch : Honey Bunch}!"

    Ranma walked blissfully {toward his : to} school. "This is going
surprisingly well," he commented to himself.  He jumped down from the
fence he was on and walked into the gates of Furinkan.  A large group
of boys was waiting near the front of the school. Ranma ignored this
and walked into the crowd towards the school.

Akane was only slightly surprised {too : to} find that the boy was next to
her in class.

"That is {Upper classman : Upperclassman} Kuno to you{: ,} cur. So, you

have heard of me, no

doubt I knew it must be so."

    "Your name is Akane Tendo, you do martial arts, I'm guessing {That :

that}

girl following us is your sister, Nabiki I think her name was. How was
that for starters?" said Ranma. The boy was obviously impressed with
his knowledge. "But don't give away too much..." he thought inwardly.

     "Kuno even if I was dating Akane; what makes you think I'd stop
just because *you* don't like it?" {s :}

    During class Ranma composed his thoughts. "Akane, why? I'm not
Ranma really, well, mostly not. Damn, I haven't even known her that
long. Hell, I hardly know her at all! This sucks. Love huh? Oh well,
it's {to : too} late now{: ,} might as well go for it."

    "Quit telling me that," she said. Not that she meant it, it was
just the {principal : principle} of the matter. Besides, any other guy

would stare

at her chest and say that, and get knocked into the stratosphere.

    "Believe it or not, I know what you mean," said Ranma {Quietly :

quietly}.



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