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From: "Thryth" <thrythlind@yahoo.com>
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Subject: [FFML] [Ranma]Hengeyokai 7

   "You should go home and get some sleep," Dr. Tofu
said.  "You won't make things go any quicker by
staying {her : here}."

   Cologne sighed and pushed Shampoo's chair legs {and : an}
inch forward, dropping the former Amazon in a tangle
of chair and flesh.

   "'Sides," Ranma said.  "It was either I make 'em
like me...or they take 'em.  I know {there : they} were after
Akane, an' I'm certain they'd like ta add the other
two to the mix also.  Either that or kill 'em.  Which
do you think is better?"

   He shifted into a snake and slid out of his bounds.
 Then shifted back into human form.  He was still in a
lot of pain, but apparently the old woman had healed {: him} a
little.  Otherwise he'd still be in bad shape,
increased healing or no.  As it was, another day of
rest and he'd be good as new.

   That was as far as the middle Tendo was willing to
go.  She thought that the female Ranma must have
gotten away, but even if she had she was incredibly
hurt.  If it weren't for the scent of violets
everywhere she thought she could have {maid out : made out : found} more
information.

   "We're going to have to live with this," Nabiki
said.  "Might as well get used to it.  {An : And} Ranma's
future reckoning to the Tendo clan aside, we have
bigger problems.  Sit down Akane, I have more bad news
for you.  This is about Yuka and Sayuri."

Ranma should have talked to Tofu before Nabiki woke up.  She might not have
believed what he passed through Tofu, but at least his side would be
available to her.  She was lucky her visit to Yuka's wasn't detected; she
would have been more cautious if she had more information.



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