Subject: [FFML] Re: [FanFic][SV][NETTG] Codename: "Project Sailor Stylin'" Ch.1
From: Jonathan Rosebaugh
Date: 3/18/2002, 6:19 PM
To: DB Sommer
CC: Boredcollective@aol.com, ffml@anifics.com


On Mon, Mar 18, 2002 at 01:50:50PM -0500, DB Sommer wrote:

"Yah!" Sailor S brought up her sword in an effort to slash
into the beast, but it moved much faster than she,

'her', I think

In general, you're wrong, and I think in this specific case you're
still wrong.
The sentence as written is shorthand for "but it moved much faster
than she did".

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