An interlude. Should be able to do this rather quickly:

Process of Elimination -- Interlude Two

Ukyou


She couldn't see the other girl, but an accidental nudge from her 
sent her bumping into the side of the narrow access corridor she was 
working in, striking her hip against a bulkhead. "Ow," she mumbled, 
looking down, but still unable to see much of the corridor where her 
lower body was still poking out. "Be careful, will you?"

"Sorry," Shampoo's voice came to her. "What status?"

"I'm halfway in and halfway out," Ukyou said.

Grunting, Ukyou turned her attention back upwards, 

unsure about that comma

to the small board 

of circuitry nestled in an inordinately oversized bundle of 
insulated wire. "What the hell were they thinking when they made 
this ship?"

Time is of the essence? :)

"He probably very lonely," Shampoo whispered back.

Like most of the people aren't. :)

"Yes," Ukyou grumbled. "But you said that I have to check an AX-15 
for damage. Not an RN. This might be part of the ship's systems, not 
the training module, for all I know."

Heh.; Good point. Wouldn't want to make a boo-boo with that.

juncture and unsealing the hatch, even as Shampoo sealed the prior 
hatch.

Slipping her hands beneath the levers to open the hatch, Ukyou 
grunted, planting her feet on the wall containing the hatch 

lot of hatches. I'd try to rephrase to cut some.

"Here," she called out supportively. "I have book. Is AX-48, yes?"

"Yeah. So how do I wire this around the screw-up for RN-32?"

"Um... white-red to pin twenty eight 

twenty-eight

"Not sure," Shampoo said quietly. "I... I like to think Ranma is 
okay. But...."

"What do you suppose will happen to us?"

Shampoo sighed, shaking her head, and grateful that Akane had decided 
an old skirt could be cut into hair-ties. "Don't know. I have 
feeling we will see Ranma again. Don't know why."

Shampoo: Maybe it because the author keep doing these interludes.

Author's Notes:

Short, pointless, and the second of three. Save, collect, trade for 
swell prizes!

I No-Prize? I could always use one of those. :)

Nice work, though as you said, very short.

D.B. Sommer

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