noirchloe wrote:
----- Original Message -----
From: "Brian Randall" <durandall@rakhal.com>
To: "noirchloe" <noirchloe@nyc.rr.com>
Cc: "FFML mailing list" <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Sunday, March 10, 2002 7:48 PM
Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma/Multiple Crossover] Enemies of the Crystal State,
chapter 2(part 2/2)
noirchloe wrote:
Insomnia compells me.
Insomnia - a cruel person.
Seems to have challenged my muse to a winners-take-all deathmatch.
Should be interesting.
a hope -- the hope (I think)
And I know who this Menchi is.
Heh. He approves of his cameo... so far.
How could he not? :)
Scryed, right? I've seen one episode, so don't expect me to keep up
with all of this.
Hopefully I can do a good enough job of introducing the characters and
elements I'm going to be using.
On your suggestion, I'll be watching more of that.
"Ah... Hi. Do you by any chance have donuts?" he asked and frowned,
apparently worried that she would answer in the negative. He looked cute
that way, almost begging for a donut, as his mannerisms calmed her. She
fought her desire to have some fun with him.
BGM -- Trigun The First Donuts -- Cynical Pink
Stop it. I have enough bad habits I don't need to go looking for more. ^_^
No worries -- these are just the tracks that came to mind while
reading these scenes. Trigun has a good OST, and I feel you managed to
capture a lot of the feel of the original series, if you make me remeber
the songs that well. :)
Should make that clearer. Their are more than two tables in the place, but
they only went by two. >_<
Ah. Explains a bit.
Though I do have to wonder how one can be both armed and dangerous
AND a pacifist....
It's Trigun... it was on the wanted poster from the manga. I enjoyed the
humor of it.
Haven't read the manga, but I guessed it was something like that. :p
'circulating shaft'? Well, you mentioned Menchi earlier, stands to
reason something lemony would sneak in.... ;)
Geez, I put _some_ things in purpose... but this wasn't one of them. ^_^
You tied Menchi to the fic. The connotations will _write themselves_.
Even though she's not speaking, Miyuki's action might be better off
in another paragraph. Not sure why, and I'm probably wrong, but....
Nothing wrong with that suggestion.
Glad you think so; I always feel like I'm being overbearing when I
make such a suggestion.
How's this sound. --> Seeking to appear non-threatening, Vash stood slowly
and raised his hands.
That works more cleanly, I think.
had been -- had done (?)
BGM -- Trigun the First Donuts -- Yellow Alert
Dynamite Rave section with FLCL of DDRAMV rocks. ^_^
I see you and rais you Dosdemon: Queen of Outer Space to FLCL.
deap seeded -- deep-seated (Though I could be wrong)
I believe you are right, Kind Sir.
I'm no 'Sir'. ^_^
And is the gunfire REALLY intent on doing that? If so, how does HE
know that? :p
=p
Those bullets could be unwitting pacifists!
I see that Menchi's influence is strong on you.
I figure get the fun out of the way before this turns too serious again.
Much like many anime, really. They start out on one level, become
more comic, and then head towards serious again. At least, a lot of the
ones I'd seen in recent months.
First sentence is awkwardly worded.
let's try--> After an extraordinarily long five seconds he found himself in
a hallway. From the looks and size of it and the rooms he had just vacated,
he presumed it was a small apartment building.
was a -- was in a
I think that's a good change.
No problem. You, Sir, have much more fortitude than I.
Where's this 'Sir'? *checks his pockets for rogue cabbits*
;)
of the bat -- off the bat (I believe)
BGM -- Trigun the First Donuts -- Carrot and >Stick
And I am up to End of the Century using footage from Escaflowne the Movie,
and loving it!
I tap 1 light J-Pop, and 1 custom edit to summong: Tomodachi --
Escaflowne
You need to watch out for those rabbit viruses.^^
:D
Formatting error, or did my copy of Mozilla do that?
I think it was you this time, I check what I receied from the FFML.
It's very likely to be me. Version 0.9.8 does strange things to
e-mails saved in the 'drafts' folder. Like make them all bold. (Luckily
I remove html formatting before I post).
Little girl bit him? O_o?
I believe it was an elboy, you know those mal-nourished little girls have
sharp edges. I'll work on something that doesn't mislead.
An elboy, eh? ;)
I never considered looking for three spaces. And thanks for calling me
outdated=p
From what I've read on it, the convention began with printing
presses. Aside from which, you're up-to-date. It's the convention that's
old. It's also still accepted, simply not required.
BGM -- Trigun the First Donuts -- No Beat
So Many Men - Fushigi Yuugi
Anime Beach -- Various -- Baby Got Back
BGM -- Shakka Zombie -- Siroi Yami No Naka
...A new album.
This is the music that was used for Tainted Donuts.
BGM -- Trigun the First Donuts -- Blood and Thunder
Back to trigun I'll go back to DDRAMV.
Get up - Various Animes
I hate the various because if I don't know them...
In order of appearance, not mentioning repeat appearances:
Kodomo No Omocha -- Ranma 1/2 -- Devil Hunter Yohko -- Tenchi
Universe -- Urutsei Yatsura -- Project A-ko -- Cutey Honey -- Dirty Pair
Flash -- Tenchi Muyo! -- Trigun -- Sailor moon (Stars).
^________^
He does know that 'the red one' is Mars through Venus's comment.
It is Ranma. Okay, that was lame. The author got confused, better. ^_^
Well, it does help avoid the repetition of 'the red one' in the
prose....
Why would they let Vash get away, and keep >Ranma there?
Vash had already gotten out of the alley when Saturn cast the silence wall.
Ah, and they don't want him to kill Vash....
BGM -- Trigun the First Donuts -- Big Bluff
I'll skip this one since it's still Get up. Although it's various consists
of SM, Ranma, Trigun, Lum and some I ddin't notice.
See above. ^___^
Okay, that explains a bit.
See, I can let the readers in on things.
Good timing for that explanation, I think.
'this instanity' I would suggest 'the insanity', but I don't
honestly know why I would. :/
I think I like it as is, although either would work.
Just my opinion, and I'm easily ignored. :)
Hah!
Yeah. Some of my gags work!
Many of them do, I just thought this one was particularly impressive.
Should that be an exclamation?
Probably, although he's being sarcastic.
Btw, Xanadu started. The prettiest segment in the DDRAMV. El Hazard lends
itself nicely here.
It ultimately scores lower than Butterfly for rewatchability.
Extraneous punctuation?
guilty.
I'll try to arrange for a stay of execution. ^_^
Heh. Well... I did choose Lucky for a reason. ;)
And I needed someone who could fight for the mayor. It just so happens I
get to have a little fun along the way.
It does work, honestly.
What already -- What, already
BGM -- Trigun the First Donuts -- Perfect >night
Holiday - The dreaded Various, but it did include another shot of Usagi and
some American Shows!
That was the animated Clerks show, which ran for two episodes.
Specifically, it's the 'Korean animation' segment.
In order of appearance:
Clerks (American), BubbleGum Crises (Priss flash-through), Giant
Robo (Ginrei flash-through), Record of the Lodoss Wars, Giant Robo,
Transformers the Movie, Sailor Moon, South Park (obviously American :),
Robotech, Hercules (Disney), Batman (American), Lupin (Castle of
Cagliostro), and Escaflowne.
And you didn't mention Ojamajo Doremi -- Love (Sonic Dream). That's
a great segment.
He's holding a rifle in one hand?
I guess that means it should be describe more fully...
Maybe. ;)
Now, to see if I can finish C&Cing everything >else in my backlog....
As I said before your fortitude is commendable. And thanks a lot for the
comments and corrections. ^_^
I hope they serve you well. :)