Jennifer Poulos wrote:

This is the first draft of Chapter three, so any C&C will be greatly
appreciated.  LS & Jen.

Absolutely wonderful story!  More, more! :)

[snip]

     She hadn't been this bored since giving Mary fellatio lessons...

[snip]

Why was giving Mary fellatio lessons boring?  Also, why wasn't it
cunillingus lessons?  It was, after all, Lilith doing the teaching, not
some male.

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print reverse( ",rekcah", " lreP", " rehtona", " tsuJ" )."\n";

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