DB Sommer wrote:
Two things to mention. Sorry about the posting twice of a message that came
through tonight. A problem with my server ended up evidentily backlogging my
messages rather than any list problems. I did not realize this until this
morning, and had no idea when the problem would be rectified. It shouldn't
happen again.
And moving on to C+C something a little different:
Right. If I don't respond to a section, that'll be because it's
written by Corwin, since he's the co-author. I forwarded a copy of your
e-mail to him (he's not on the FFML), so he can reply to those points. :p
"Stop it, Sailor Paragon!"
Haven't read it myself.
There's a fanfic with that name? Interesting.
"Yeah, Sailor Temptress,"
Hmm. Now this one I might be familiar with, eh?
:D Corwin's, not mine, but yes, this one was intentional.
"Hello, my beautiful Airen," Sailor Stoic crooned in his masculine
voice, his long hair done in a weird style that resembled meatballs
and spaghetti to Ranma. "Now, finally, the Schools will be United!"
should 'United' be capitalized?
It's a reference to the fanfic, "Schools United".
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Ecchi Party -- Chapter One: Ranma's First Time
Oh? Intersting title. Not familiar with CP, so be forewarned.
It's cute. Has some interesting parellels with fanfiction, too.
Ranma jerked himself
Now that could be considered ecchi all right. :)
*snicker*
out to him as the cart started picking up speed, "Denial leads to
delusion. Delusion leads to favoritism. Favoritism leads to bashing.
Bashing leads to the Dark Side."
Hehehe. Nice philosophy
-_- It's sad, but you can tell that my contributions to the story
were minimal.
"Ahem!" cried out an irate voice. "I don't traffic such filth!"
The two men leaned forward ominously, the first muttering, "Brudda
Cor, dis woman don wanna give us da ecchi!"
"Meine freund Dur! What shall we do?"
What are these two from, anyway?
Well, Cor would be Corwin, and Dur would be Durandall (I think
that's me ;) -- so blatantly self-serving author-inserts.
We put the 'A' in 'ANC'. :p
"Feh," the third voice continued, the speaker just coming into
Ranma's point of view. "Dojinshi is like okonomiyaki -- it's got a
proud tradition, and I'm not going to let your eagerness corrupt our
enduring ethics!" Ranma blinked at the girl as he saw her. Long,
brown hair in a pair of ponytails
pair?
Modled after the Comic Party character whos name eludes me at the
moment.
Ranma looked at the papers in his hand, reading the cover aloud.
"'The adventures of Ranchan and Ucchan'? What's this?"
Something bad. Run for it while you can.
This section, however, is mine. :)
"What the heck's a dojinshi?" Ranma mumbled, eyeing the cover of the
book in his hands. An oddly well drawn rendering of himself stood on
the cover, in a grossly exaggerated bishonen pose, the same girl he
was talking to draped over his picture-self's arm. "Kinda cool," he
admitted, flipping it open. "It's just like me, I guess." Though he
didn't bother mentioning that she had misspelled 'Martial Arts' as
'Marital Arts' on the cover...
Oh, I don't think that's a misspelling.
:p
Muscling her way through the crowds, upset, confused, lost, and more
than a little bit hungry, Akane wondered if she were moving in a
large circle. The raving otaku gave her no more attention that the
than the
Whoops.
Akane knelt on the floor, trying to help the doctor collect his
comics. "Are these yours?" she asked worriedly. "'Housewife on the
Rampage'? 'House Call'? 'Betty Does the Med School'..." Akane
dropped the manga, backing away against the wall of the crowd behind
her. "You're one of them!" she wailed. "You're just like them!"
Tofu: Of course. Why else would I be here?
Corwin's joke, again.
"Yep! Your father engaged us, and I decided to sell dojinshi about us
to educate the world about our love!"
Whahaha!
And again. :p
Tofu flipped through the manga, and Akane peeked over his shoulder to
study it. She looked away again, very quickly. The artist had done a
reasonable job of guessing what Ranma looked like, to have drawn him
naked in that much detail. The doctor made a thoughtful noise, and
flipped the manga shut, returning it to the girl. "A little bit much
for someone who's not used to it," Tofu admonished. "These things
need to be built up to, you know. Make a man jump into something
like that with no preparation, it's no wonder he loses it all three
pages before the money shot!"
HAHAHAHA!
But that one's all mine. ^__^
That was truly twisted. Not sure where you're going with it, but it has the
potential to be interesting. Nice moments strewn throughout. Lots of humor
and lighthearted action. Hope to see more.
So do we! Thank you very much for the feedback. :P
D.B. Sommer