"I won't," Atsuki said, moving to block her way. "Now,
really. I'd think that the vaunted high-profile Queen
of Cinq would be more polite to a mere commoner."

"polite" is not the right word.  One is polite to one's
equals.  One is gracious with "mere commoners".  

"Oh, nothing much," Atsuki said. "I'd just heard
rumors that you were once...involved with Heero Yuy,
and I wanted to see for myself if they were true."

There's something odd about that reasoning.  How is
just looking at Relena going to tell her if they are
true?  Now, Atsuki is apparently not very sane so perhaps
her reasoning isn't supposed to make sense, but perhaps
asking Relena would be more effective than just standing
in way and looking at her.  

"What makes you word it like I have a contract on
him?" Relena demanded. "Heero isn't anyone's...he's a
person. A person can't belong to another person."

To "have a contract" on someone is to offer money to 
have them killed.  I do not believe that Relena has
ever done that.  

"Can he?"

Once again, the conversation is slightly loopy.  That
response isn't appropriate for what Relena said.  

Relena narrowed her eyes. "I don't know who you are,"
she said, "and I don't know why you're attacking me
when I've never seen you before in my life. But I
advise you to kindly step out of my way before
anything drastic happens."

Like what?

drugs from dealer to buyer. I drink, I smoke, and I
have so many substances floating in my veins that you
probably couldn't extract pure blood from me if you
tried. What can you say to that, Relena Darlian
Peacecraft?"

Well, what can one say to that idiotic babble?  Perhaps
Relena should recommend a good detox clinic to the crazy
chick.  Perhaps not.  She seems to be rather lacking in
wit.  Still, I'd think she'd look more confused than 
shocked since this stream of unwanted personal details
comes from nowhere.  

Relena's face was white. "How dare you?" Her voice was
shaking with barely restrained fury. "How dare you
threaten me? Who are you to say things like this?"

<sigh>  I don't know who's more pathetic, the crazy chick
or the idiot.  

"Darkflight," she said gently. "I'm not a nobody. I
can...What do you want? I can get it done for you.
Anything you want."

"Are you crazy?" he blurted. "You think you can
compete with the likes of that queen and those other
pilots for Wing?"

Yes she is crazy.  Now the question is, did you want
to come across that way, and did you want Relena
to come across as an idiot?


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