Always nice to see another AMG fic.

A few things I want to point out.

First, since he started working at Whirlwind, Keiichi no longer spends
much time at NIT. If he's working on a motor, he's more likely to be
doing it at the shop.

Second is this,

But something about him had changed when he had helped Belldandy stop

the 

attack that would have destroyed Yggdrasil.

The attack wasn't aimed at Yggdrasil. It was FROM Yggdrasil. I think
that Keiichi would have used up most of the loaned power to cancel that
attack. But what you are describing isn't raw power so that's ok.

Even the engine before him had a spirit, one that regarded him 
fearfully, as he worked on it. But he pretended he couldn't see it, and

did his best to ensure the engine a long, functional life.

Bell would tell him to talk to it. It would perform better that way.

It's interesting that the goddesses seem to be taking the 'loss' of
Kami-sama about as hard as losing a server. I hope you show more
reactions in the full story.

Promising. I look forward to seeing the whole story.


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